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my best poem yet...STILL

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wheresmytoby

wheresmytoby

Wed, April 01, 2009

I'm still here

alive & breathing

I still sigh

after waking

praying is still rendered

USELESS

just as I am

my life is hindered

by my still troubled soul

pain overwhelms me

& tears still flow

my emotions confuse me

I'm purpetually lost

still no hope of being found

APPLAUD DAMN IT

I'm still here

 

slr 2/13/09

4/ 1/09 8:55pm

A very niceSmile and tradgicCry poem.

 

Ah, but alas,

in the end there is

a bow of hope

as the din of thin applause

settles softly

to silence

yet you remain.

4/ 1/09 11:27pm

Smilethanks

yours was exactly what i needed to hear at this moment.

4/ 2/09 12:40am

Oh, but how could one not respond to another wordsmith.

 

What I wrote was only the impression of your poem.  That you remained at the end was that indication of hope.  You were not lost.  You knew exactly where you were.  If you exist, there is always hope of being found.Laughing

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