a winters inertia was dreary and ominous
a breath of signifigant accuracy needed no guidence
followed through this fridgid display of pupil
thoses eyes always my achilles heel
hearts opposite hers pulsated strange
circuits not of blood,she did not feel
feet did not grace the ground
shadows of ...
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I am feeling it...
Merely Me
Friday, October 02, 2009 at 07:51 PMre: I am feeling it...
life sucks
Saturday, October 03, 2009 at 08:27 PMthank you.. I think this is my most polished peice yet...i really like the theme....my inspiration was not my freind which ive lost however, it wass more about the ending of relationships,moving on, and about the changing of seasons...(:
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Posted 11/22 Comments (3)
This weekend has been one filled with a lot of...
My favorite lines are the last three...I like the image of feeling numb due to the winter rain. The "winter rain" theme really catches one's attention because rain is usually put together with summer or spring. But sure...it can and does rain in winter too...a very cold and almost freezing rain. You can really feel the mood in that.
Is the inspiration for this...the friend that you had lost?
You are really working through things with your writing...just let those words pour out...you are doing a great job.
Thank you for sharing.