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a winters inertia was dreary and ominous
a breath of signifigant accuracy needed no guidence
followed through this fridgid display of pupil
thoses eyes always my achilles heel
hearts opposite hers pulsated strange
circuits not of blood,she did not feel
feet did not grace the ground
shadows of breathless demons no intent to conceal
stood feirce by her girth,spoke without making a sound
everything still except shattering dreams
realms of rain reigned missles of frozen heartbreak
souls peirced my layers desperate for a breath
those demons finished me off,with tales of decay and death
sanitizing her hands with blood which bled for her
when all was over i couldn't feel the pain
because after all
I was caught in a winters rain...........
My favorite lines are the last three...I like the image of feeling numb due to the winter rain. The "winter rain" theme really catches one's attention because rain is usually put together with summer or spring. But sure...it can and does rain in winter too...a very cold and almost freezing rain. You can really feel the mood in that.
Is the inspiration for this...the friend that you had lost?
You are really working through things with your writing...just let those words pour out...you are doing a great job.
Thank you for sharing.
thank you.. I think this is my most polished peice yet...i really like the theme....my inspiration was not my freind which ive lost however, it wass more about the ending of relationships,moving on, and about the changing of seasons...(: