Lover's Betrayal (a poem about head pain)
I might have called you soul mate With such unrelenting presence But your touch is not a comfort Yet harsh in very essence
You're the s...
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Wonderful rendition
Jesskit69
Saturday, April 18, 2009 at 09:51 AM -
Lover's Betrayal - Congratulations
Lynne
Monday, April 27, 2009 at 11:40 AMCongratulations, Zoe, on a hauntingly beautiful, painterly poem. This touches home for so many of us who are often there, yet know we're not alone.
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Nicely Written!
cking
Thursday, April 30, 2009 at 12:26 PMNice poem and very soulful! Well done!
Clemmie
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Happy Thanksgiving
Posted 11/22 Comments (1)
Dear migraine family - it's time for me despite having...
The irony here is that I have the ticklings of the beginning of a migraine so reading yours now is prophetic to the rest of my day today.
Beautifully written, and though past the length required, I'm glad you posted. I myself, did not re-read the instructions & had to shorten and/or censor my poems. But I'm happily keeping the originals with all their fervor and flavor.
Best to you, Jesskit69