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Lover's Betrayal

By zoe ashcraft Friday, April 17, 2009

 

Lover's Betrayal 
(a poem about head pain) 

 

I might have called you soul mate
   With such unrelenting presence
             But your touch is not a comfort
      Yet harsh in very essence


You're the shadow nipping at my heels
   -a darkness ever encroaching 
               You drape your arm about my neck
          -Lover close approaching


As if to finger strands of hair
    You coax my weighty skull
        To rest within your hold - and I
                     Ignore the pressure, dull


            From ear to ear-A backwards smile
        Your hand thus placed
    Coyly takes
  My oxygen, my fluids -vital
in lulling, sickening pace


At length you sing a ringing song
      Within my ears so bright
I shrink in fetal pose
     And hide my eyes from glaring light


So dim to all of those
    who do not know your stabbing glance
            Who do not know your dank caress
                      that spirals into trance


With dagger sharp betrayal
     You slide your greasy nail
         Into the very brainstem till my
                             Wrestling is derailed-

                  You think to own me there within
                            Tomb-like catatonic
              But rise again I do you fool, is it-
                       Not a bit ironic?


          I hold the keys of life see here-
                Bought by my truest love*
                  And this you cannot take from me
                       *A birthright from above*


By Zoe Ashcraft

 

Laughter, NOt good Medicine. (headache poem)
4/18/09 9:51am

The irony here is that I have the ticklings of the beginning of a migraine so reading yours now is prophetic to the rest of my day today.

 

Beautifully written, and though past the length required, I'm glad you posted.  I myself, did not re-read the instructions & had to shorten and/or censor my poems. But I'm happily keeping the originals with all their fervor and flavor.

 

Best to you, Jesskit69

4/27/09 11:40am

Congratulations, Zoe, on a hauntingly beautiful, painterly poem. This touches home for so many of us who are often there, yet know we're not alone.

4/30/09 12:26pm

Nice poem and very soulful!  Well done!

Clemmie

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By zoe ashcraft— Last Modified: 09/04/10, First Published: 04/17/09